1. Opening – It’s getting dark outside, and it is time for Fallon to come in from playing hide-n-go-seek.
2. Mom’s Dialogue – “Fallon, it’s time for bed!” screams her mother off screen.
Extremely vexed that she has to go to bed so early, and as she approaches the back porch, she trips over something.
3. Darn Cat – Fallon very angrily looks down and sees the neighborhood cat, Oogoly, all laid out looking extremely dirty, nasty, and smelly on the back porch.
4. Angry Fallon – So angered by the cat’s grossness, Fallon kicks at him and sends him flying into the backyard.
5. Aftermath -Fallon quickly dust of her hands and angrily slams the door.
6. Bed Time Fallon starts to feel to feel sort of guilty, as she sits in bed.
7. Thinking – Fallon thinks about how she kicked Oogoly and hurt him, so she is tossing and turning with sleep being difficult because of her guilty and regretful conscience.
8. Wake up – Fallon slits opens her eyes because she hears something strange in her room.
9. Seeing – Fallon blinks her eyes a few times and suddenly a figure appears in front of her, closer and closer.
10. Recognition – Fallon realizes that the image appears to be a giant
smoky, ghostly, blubbery distorted looking figure of a huge cat .
11. Run- As the giant ghost of Oogoly chases Fallon throughout the house with his mouth open as to eat her, she runs for dear life with eyes opened wide as a frightened deer.
12. Blubber – He chases her throughout the house , but his huge blubber
is blocking her from actually getting away.
13. Fallon is desperately trying to get away from the ghost but he is very fast.
14. Lunges – The ghost lunges for Fallon but misses as she stumbles onto the back-porch.
15. Enlightenment – Fallon slips on something and realizes that it is Oogoly still lying there.
16.Apology – Fallon gently picks up Oogoly, cuddles, and apologizes to him as the huge ghost slowly closes his mouth in a smile while observing up close.
17. The End – Fallon squeezes Oogoly with love, the ghost disappears, and Fallon remains thereholding a very happy Oogoly.
Wednesday, March 10, 2010
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